An in-game character that doesn't have a typical route, but is present throught the VN and has a lot of endings of his own with the heroine. He is not one of the 3 guys on the cover.
I love scrolling through pages and pages of itchio's visual novel search results, because sometimes I find little gems of indie visual novels that really click with me. Your game is one of them!! I really loved y'alls game. The characters were charming, the art was refreshingly different (I love anime art, but I am partial to styles that aren't the norm) and the story was fun to read. I especially loved the backgrounds--their mixed-media collage-esque look really did it for me. Faery was such a sweetie, and I loved each of the LIs in their own way. I liked the way each route revealed a little more of the story, and the world in which these characters inhibit. If I had any constructive criticism, it would be that I would have loved to have a longer game, and more time with your lovely characters. I also noticed Astrifer didn't get a kiss cg 👀
Overall though, y'all did such a lovely job, and I had lots of fun with your game!!! I look forward to whatever future creations y'all make :3
Thank you🥰We are so glad you enjoyed the story and the art. Our goal was to make people who play the game have a fun experience😊and it's a dream come true when we get positive feeback like this😊
Hi! Just played astrifer’s route and I loove that happy end celebration -what a cute surprise!! :’D I wasn’t sure what to expect from the game other than it’s an otome but it turned out to be such a cute, kinda unpredictable game! I like the concept of LIs from different worlds, the humour and characters. I thought the background pictures were put together interestingly and the CGs are lovely.
I think I would’ve liked to see more clarity in the sprites designs and faces though, and maybe bring them closer to the camera? The flash of red and white text, although it creates a sense of danger, wasn’t so good visually, and the font for the text made it difficult to read ^^'
Anyway, thanks for sharing and making this game, I enjoyed all the little cute things that kept me reading :D
Thank you for your time and the comment :D We appreciate the feedback you gave us and will try to improve in the future :) We are glad you enjoyed playing the game :)
I LOVE this game! Astrifer is my favorite, but I love Gawain the himbo and of course Leon is a very close second, we love a gentleman. The story is engaging, the art is so gorgeous and unique and it's just an all around fun experience! Thank you for making this and I hope you make more games in the future <3
The thing that attracted my attention at first sight, is the art style. It's very unique and got its own aesthetic, then the theme about each Love interest from each dimension. SUCH A GREAT CONCEPT
I kind of think that the way MC and LIs bonding is a little bit too rushed. In my opinion, they didn't interact with each other that much or not having heart to heart moments enough to convince how can they trust each other. Maybe inserting more conversations or the situation that made them see each other's charming point in your future works.
Btw, if you have planned to make more VNs, I'm really joyful looking forward to it. Your novel literally hit my appetite points!
Hi! Thank you so much for the feedback🥰We are glad you enjoyed the story and your critique is appriciated and welcome.
My friend and I were discussing that we would love to make more Visual Novels so feedback here will help us in the future too :) We'd be thrilled if you'd check our next work too 😊
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i am looking for some good yandere games and found this game so i just wanted to ask *cough cough* who of the characters is the yandere?
An in-game character that doesn't have a typical route, but is present throught the VN and has a lot of endings of his own with the heroine. He is not one of the 3 guys on the cover.
I love scrolling through pages and pages of itchio's visual novel search results, because sometimes I find little gems of indie visual novels that really click with me. Your game is one of them!! I really loved y'alls game. The characters were charming, the art was refreshingly different (I love anime art, but I am partial to styles that aren't the norm) and the story was fun to read. I especially loved the backgrounds--their mixed-media collage-esque look really did it for me. Faery was such a sweetie, and I loved each of the LIs in their own way. I liked the way each route revealed a little more of the story, and the world in which these characters inhibit. If I had any constructive criticism, it would be that I would have loved to have a longer game, and more time with your lovely characters. I also noticed Astrifer didn't get a kiss cg 👀
Overall though, y'all did such a lovely job, and I had lots of fun with your game!!! I look forward to whatever future creations y'all make :3
Thank you🥰We are so glad you enjoyed the story and the art. Our goal was to make people who play the game have a fun experience😊and it's a dream come true when we get positive feeback like this😊
obsessed with faery and astrifer... they are so silly...
We are so glad you enjoyed the characters :D
Hello LadyBex, I just replied to you on the other post! Wanted to say this game has a great story! Keep it up and well done lady.
Thank you for your feedback and the first YouTube video of the game :D It is a big deal to us, much appreciated :)
You are welcome! The story is surely interesting, keep it up!
Hi! Just played astrifer’s route and I loove that happy end celebration -what a cute surprise!! :’D I wasn’t sure what to expect from the game other than it’s an otome but it turned out to be such a cute, kinda unpredictable game! I like the concept of LIs from different worlds, the humour and characters. I thought the background pictures were put together interestingly and the CGs are lovely.
I think I would’ve liked to see more clarity in the sprites designs and faces though, and maybe bring them closer to the camera? The flash of red and white text, although it creates a sense of danger, wasn’t so good visually, and the font for the text made it difficult to read ^^'
Anyway, thanks for sharing and making this game, I enjoyed all the little cute things that kept me reading :D
Thank you for your time and the comment :D We appreciate the feedback you gave us and will try to improve in the future :)
We are glad you enjoyed playing the game :)
I LOVE this game! Astrifer is my favorite, but I love Gawain
thehimboand of course Leon is a very close second, we love a gentleman. The story is engaging, the art is so gorgeous and unique and it's just an all around fun experience! Thank you for making this and I hope you make more games in the future <3Thank you for the lovely feedback :D I am glad you enjoyed the game and I wish you a wonderful day :)
I'm really glad this game is finished!
The thing that attracted my attention at first sight, is the art style. It's very unique and got its own aesthetic, then the theme about each Love interest from each dimension. SUCH A GREAT CONCEPT
I kind of think that the way MC and LIs bonding is a little bit too rushed. In my opinion, they didn't interact with each other that much or not having heart to heart moments enough to convince how can they trust each other. Maybe inserting more conversations or the situation that made them see each other's charming point in your future works.
Btw, if you have planned to make more VNs, I'm really joyful looking forward to it. Your novel literally hit my appetite points!
Hi! Thank you so much for the feedback🥰We are glad you enjoyed the story and your critique is appriciated and welcome.
My friend and I were discussing that we would love to make more Visual Novels so feedback here will help us in the future too :) We'd be thrilled if you'd check our next work too 😊
Just started playing and I got to say, the vvisuals are really interesting.
tnx for the comment, we hope you like the game!